Wednesday, June 20, 2007

New Poem

So, apparently, the idea that grabbed my attention before absolutely refuses to be fleshed out. Maybe it'll come later, but for now, here is the complete poem. And I may never flesh it out.

today my eyes
are blue.

So, what do you think? I hope it doesn't come across as a cop-out.

1 comment:

julie said...

It seems to have so much potential! How frustrating for you. As it is, it works okay. No, not a cop-out. Like you said, you can always come back to it later if you feel inspired.

Speaking of...ever finish that french poem from way back when? :)